Danielle, your dessert looks amazing! You did a great job on your presentation, however, I would suggest that you maybe 1) Use more pictures than words (that is how I learn best) and 2) make the reader/learner more intrigued into the topic. What I really liked about your presentation was the 1) details you gave 2) bright colors and 3)the set up of the presentation. Overall, I thought your presentation was great and you did an outstanding job! Nicely done!